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Many people out there treat them badly.
Many people viciously murdering them.
It's a waste, you know,
'Cause they love you no matter what…
No matter what you wear,
No matter the amount of money in your pocket,
No matter how beautiful you are,
No matter if you have any neurological disorders,
You could be the poorest and most hopeless person in the world and they will still love you.
These beings are animals,
God's gift to this selfish, messed up world.

You know about those poor puppies thrown in dumpsters?
Abused by those ignorant, sick and twisted people that don't have a word to describe how awful they are!
(You know who you are!)  
It's stuck there, scarred on both the inside and outside,
Left to rot and suffer.
It sits there, death slowly overpowering its life,
Wondering what it did to deserve this.

Millions of dogs and cats are put to sleep, you know.
That wouldn't happen,
There might not even be animal shelters,
If we all actually gave a damn!
If we all loved them instead of abusing them.

Do you find it funny?
Do you honestly think it's amusing to abuse animals?
Do you think it is entertainment to burn them?
Stab them?
Deprive them of their food?
Throw them in a microwave?
Do you think it is right?
If you do,
Then you do not deserve to live!

It's painful,
Seeing poor, innocent animals that will give their undying love to you succumb.

Do you see animals massacre anything for fun?
Do you see them blowing places up?
Do you see them starting meaningless wars?
I don't!
All I see is the positive impact that they bring to this world!

Animals are so wonderful!
You want to know why?
It's because they aren't human.
Animal abuse just pisses me off so much! :iconangryplz:
So I wrote a poem on it!
I hope you like it!
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HuntingForHappiness Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Hi, I'm critiquing on behalf of :iconwriters--club:. :wave:

I'll start by saying that I love to see people speaking out about causes they feel passionately about.

As for the poem, I feel that it has a lot of potential, especially given your other work which is, from a technical point of view, more well-written. You have this good concept of 'animal vs. human: who is the moral one?' and I think that that could be expanded on in a more poetic way. Which brings me to the main issue I have with this poem, and it is, again, a technical thing, but it just doesn't seem like a poem, whereas your other stuff does. It is probably partly due to your emotional investment in this, but it is also something that is worth working on in general. If you'd like more specific feedback on ways to improve this poem, please do let me know.

Otherwise, I'll finish by saying once again that I love your passion, and I hope you start writing again soon, so you can continue to share and develop your activism and writing skills.
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ShadowtheHedgehog137 Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
Trueness.
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SUPASERVO Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2012
I'm feelin that poem btw
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Angelfariy10 Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
i am clapping! literally clapping!
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Sabehlra Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2012  Student General Artist
I have a shirt that says:
"To err is human,
to forgive, canine."
I prefer felines, but I do love dogs, too.
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TheTalentless Featured By Owner Nov 5, 2012  Student General Artist
The last 3 sentences are so true.
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Goldensilverdragon Featured By Owner Nov 4, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
I hate animal abuse to and I love the poem. <3
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EclecticQuill Featured By Owner Nov 4, 2012  Student Writer
Totally agree, and love the poem. :nod:
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